7th Block Grammar & Composition

Wednesday, January 7, 2015

Finding Freedom!

Portal - Underwater Wheelchair by Sue Austin 2008Today's free writing topic, if you so choose, is about artist Sue Austin.  As a TED talks speaker, Sue Austin describes her journey to freedom, all while being confined to a wheelchair.  It's an amazing story of creativity and finding new perspective in the world.  As writers, we might think about what confines us, what our limitations are, and how we can make use of what we have.

We are continuing with Grammar Bytes, but today our assignment is to complete the first three activities in Exercise 2:  Fragments.

At the beginning of class Wednesday, all of Exercise 1 is due.  We'll review answers and move on to fragments.  The first three activities or handouts for Exercise 2 are due at the beginning of class on Friday if not completed in class Wednesday.  There's a quiz on Tuesday!  These first two exercises should give you the review you need to make an "A."

Saturday, January 3, 2015

Welcome 2015!

My vacation flew, and like I do so often, I wonder where the holiday season went.  I took time to read over your end of the semester letters, and I'd like to share a few things I learned.

First, a number of you expressed a desire to review rules of punctuation and grammar. Notice the new links on the right side of our home page; these will take you to a web site called Grammar Bytes.  There you will find interactive exercises which will review many of the writing challenges we all face.  We will start with punctuating a sentence, and though that seems a simple place to begin, it is indeed an area of concern:  sentence fragments and run-ons or fused sentences.

The exercises games are fun, and you'll get credit for completing them by recording your scores on  hand-outs to go with each.  Our class will complete an exercise link each class, and then we'll quiz over the material.  This means that our first day back, which is January 5th, we will begin with exercise 1.  On Wednesday we'll complete exercise 2, and on Friday there will be a quiz.  We will continue with grammar during the following weeks, but this will get us started.

Next,  I'd like to address the area of late work.  In many of the year-end letters, students voiced a concern about kids who hold us back, students who come in unprepared, or distract us with off-task behavior, or don't participate.  There will be no more credit assigned for late work.  Period.  Unless you have an excused absence due to illness, there is no late work.  If you have a school related activity and have to miss class, hand in your paper ahead of time!

I thought it went without saying, but I'll say it again:  plagiarism will result in a score of a zero, and the work cannot be made up. 

On a lighter note, we will freewrite at the beginning of each class, which will give you a great jump start on your writer's notebook.  Your first installment will be due on Friday, January 23rd.  Who knows?  If you really buckle down during class, you probably won't have as much to do outside of class toward your notebook!

Reading responses will come in the form of articles posted to our blog, which you can read and respond to.  They may not necessarily be due on Friday.  We will read and post as we go.  The dates for responding will be the beginning of the next class unless otherwise noted.  Several of you commented about the difficulty to balance the writing projects we did along with the writer's notebook and the reading responses.  This should help.  I'll post an article, and you'll have some time to read during class and post your response.  If and when you don't have time to finish, it becomes homework to complete before the next class.

So there it is, my response to your concerns!   Let's have an awesome 2015.  My word for the year is "tranquility," or at least that's my goal.  I will get there by working ahead, finding some quiet time for contemplation, and sharing a peaceful classroom setting with self-directed, motivated, and engaged students dedicated to success.  Happy 2015!


Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Final Exams...Winter Break...Hang In There!

The semester is ending, snow is in the forecast, and I'd like to take the opportunity to wish you a restful, peaceful, happy winter break!

As we close the semester, I'll be checking section 4 of your portfolios, looking for your graded final papers with teacher comments and your "portfolio" copy, which means it has been combed and corrected.  For additional points, you are supposed to choose one of your final papers for substantive revision.  If you are unclear what this means, check the final exam paper directions!

Second semester students should hang on to the portfolios.  We will be building other sections as well as adding to your writing repertoire.  We'll try additional genres, continue to research, and rearrange our writing groups since the roster will be changing.  If you are staying, good for you!  It will only strengthen and further your skills.  If you are moving on, I am sure you will be missed.  Thank you all for your efforts and your patience as we explored new projects!  Happy Holidays to you all!

Thursday, December 11, 2014

Pecha Kucha Rocked It or Pecha Kucha Train Wreck?

First, a congratulations to all of you for trying something new and sharing something new with the class.  It's so nice to see a slide show that compliments what's being said (or voiced over) instead of being read directly from a script posted on slides!  The topics were interesting, the pictures colorful, and the whole thing enlightening and entertaining.  Bravo!

That said, please post your slide show to our blog by creating your own post and reflecting on the experience (classroom appropriate and kind, please).  You might discuss what you learned through your own research - new knowledge about your topic - and also what you learned about the method of presenting.  You should mention presentations that stood out to you and taught you something new.

For those of you suffering from a technology snafu (no audio, no transitions, and so forth), kudos to you for trying.  Maybe as you upload your slide show to your blog, you can correct the audio or provide in your blog post the text of your information we should have heard.  I'm afraid some of the shows got lost in translation because the audio didn't carry the presentation.  I didn't forsee this, but I wish I had.  It's hard to evaluate these shows.  You should have prepared for an event (like no audio) by simply giving your presentation live, but I should have forewarned you as well. I didn't feel like I could ask at the last minute.    For those of you who have your audio fixed, we can redo the presentation.  If it's not fixed, and you have already presented under duress,  provide us on your blog post some of the information that would have been on your audio, or you can still present live!

Some of you are ready to take your show on the road.  Wonder when the next Pecha Kucha is in our area!

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Final Workshop Day for Presentation!

Wednesday marks the final day for in-class work on presentations and conferencing.  To avoid bedlam and maximize productivity, keep conferencing at your own table with members of your group, and whisper or talk so softly that others aren't interrupted with noise pollution.  You will be earning participation points today for your QUIET demeanor and ON-TASK behavior.  Please no carpet area or moving to sit with friends!  I have to insist that everyone can concentrate, so beware of ruining part of your presentation grade with bad behavior (heavens forbid)!

When you have finalized your presentation slides and set the transitioning, please email your presentations to me at both addresses:  bjames@spsmail.org    and  katie.ann.james@gmail.com.   Tuesday we are starting presentations, and you will be handing in your presentation packet, made up of two things - your outline and your conferencing notes.  You won't need a folder, but you will want to staple your notes to your outline for full credit.

We will play the lottery for the order of presentations, so come prepared!  Good luck!  Break a leg!  Can't wait!

If you haven't handed in your autobiography packet (first draft with conferencing notes and second, polished draft) or your annotated bibliography, turn them in before next week.  Last chance for full credit is this week, and the last chance for late credit for these and anything else is Tuesday, December 9th!
For Friday:

First, a sad farewell to Ms. Reaves!  You will be writing a letter, and she will give you more input.  Please show your respect by giving her your very, very best on this day!

You are wondering what's in store for Friday, and if all goes well today, we may finish "loose ends" quietly, but there'll be no conferencing so that those of you wanting to work on the portfolio may do so in class.

A "loose ends" day is not a "free" day.  Rather, it is a class period set aside for organizing the portfolio, for polishing the presentation independently, or any other composition work for this class.  On Wednesday you all received print outs of your grades.

Friday is a good day to devote to missing items, polishing your pieces for the portfolio, and reading the blog!  (Your portfolio cover sheets are available on the front table.  Remember, you will make necessary corrections to your three formal pieces - your "This I Believe" narrative, the personal statement, and the autobiography.  You will choose one of those pieces to make substantial revisions! Fun!)  Friday is a day to work in pleasant silence!

Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Google Slides Advice

For those of you working with Google Presentation, here is a very handy youtube video that describes the process of creating transitions that last 20 seconds per slide. Take a look and see if that answers any of your questions!

To give you an idea, I had no idea how to do it and now I'm pretty sure I could make a very impressive Pecha Kucha if given the chance. ;)

Monday, December 1, 2014

Turkey Break Welcome

Hello 7th block! I hope that you had a nice break, but now we're back to the daily grind--your research presentation!

Today, your task is simple. Firstly, your presentation should already be in the works. Ms. James and I will be returning any outlines that have been turned in (all outlines will be collected on the day of your presentation, so keep track of them) and the day is yours to conference and rehearse for the big presentation day.

The second item on the list requires that you think critically about what makes a presentation work. We will be watching part of a sample Pecha Kucha in class today and then you will be asked to pick a Pecha Kucha from the official website to watch, analyze, and write a blog post about it. Think about the following as you view the presentation:

1. What does the presenter do well? Are there any aspects that were particularly effective?
2. What might the presenter do to improve? Are the visual aspects interesting? Do they talk too quickly?
3. What did you notice about the presentation as a whole. What are your feelings about the Pecha Kucha as a presentation form? Do you think you'll be able to fill in your 10 slides?

If you address items 1, 2, and 3, you should have at least two paragraphs or more!

Lastly, the day will consist of conferences over your Pecha Kucha presentation. Even if you have yet to complete your Powerpoint or Google Slides presentation, you should still present a rough draft to at least two partners (one person at a time). Each presenter and responder have a sheet to fill out to discuss the rehearsal process and any revisions that need to be made.

Good luck on your rehearsal and Ms. James and I cannot wait to see the final products. Break a leg!!

Bonus:  The assignment is worth 10 points. Those posted before class on Wednesday will earn 10 bonus points.  Those posted by the end of class Wednesday will earn 10 points.  Zero points for classwork not completed.